Loved loved loved Tyler.  He was great.   I really don't know if I buy him as a five year old boy, but i'm not good with ages and development, so whatever.
Yeah, the relationship between her and Buchman.  It was okay.  It just seemed really shallow.  I liked him, but i just didn't think i was prepared for the relationship.  I write short stories and I think I could have made the connection work better.
Cassie annoyed me that she was soooo stubborn about TJ.  He was awful.  I mean, why did it take her so long to figure that out?  I wanted to slap her.  In a nice friendly way.
Once again, liked the main character's friends.  They seem to be the solid (more) ones.
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I agree that it did seem like all of a sudden there was this attraction between Cassie and Buchman that wasn't really hinted at before they started getting physical. Maybe because of the shortness of the length, but I think Eden is right, she could do more believable attraction. I did really like her friends. They and the son were the best part of the story.
Again, I echo what was said...lousy connection between Cassie and Buchman, but great friends!
~Em~
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